"...have the beginning of a book...
liked the depth of the
characters" ---Richard
Adiansingh
"...deep! I love
the title... have many lines of prose that are very
romantic"
---Lee Ann Deeter
"...What an excellent story...
engaging from beginning to end... It's like a good movie that
you want to see at least a second
time" ---Dianne Spinazzola
"...liked it from beginning to
end... The ending makes me wonder, is he real, are we? I like a
story that makes me think or wonder"
---Elizabeth V. Kearns
"...allow me to be exclamatory
for just a bit and say one word, "WOW!" I loved your story, from
the very first word to the one that provides the end. I found it
to be completely engrossing and I did not want to put it down at
all" ---Nicole Sandiford
"...The biggest strength, I
thought, was the plotting... a story with a dense, intricate
plot, woven tight... dialogue is solid, no
complaints..." ---Richard Sanford
"...contains several interesting,
even fascinating ideas and plot lines. However... By the time I
got to page 16 I was quite frustrated by my confusion and had to
stop reading because I no longer understood what was
happening..." ---Daina Palermo
"...terrific concept(very Paul
Auster-esque, City of Lights)... Your lines, dialogue,
characters(especially the wizard***) are
terrific" ---Gretchen Carlson |